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River

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That sound
is it laughing?
A stick has fallen helplessly
into its grasp.
It throws it to its friend
back
and forth,
around
and around.
So many  random directions
who shall catch it next?
The stick falls,
it is free
but only for a moment.
They catch it again
laughing
like kids with a new toy.
So powerful
that nothing in its range
is safe.
Catching, twirling,
tossing, throwing,
and then...
peace.
They have become bored
and the stick floats on
as if nothing ever happened.
Poem we did for english

I though of the idea while we were hiking and convinently the assinment was to give something in nature a personification (living or human qualities) |D

So this is it

I really like this one, one of the few poems I've written that actually turned out really well.

I'm just not made to write poetry |D
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omgitsfr4ncis's avatar
Really nice poem, likes it a lot. :nod:

Makes me wish I lived closer to a river (more than before anyway). :XD:

:+fav: